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From the Rail Track

The hoot of the train was shrill enough to bring me back to my consciousness, With eyes half shut I could see the sunrise albeit my body was in oppressive soreness. Thankful was I that the night was over, And a ray of hope was now surely closer. For I was made to flung a night before, Next to a track that was never explored. Till last night I had never thought that the body I reserved, Would soon fall in jeopardy and be set free only when it was thrice served. I somehow managed to stand up and look around, But the only thing I could see was a local rail over the ground. As the train approached me a passenger looked at me and gave a shout, She made the train stop, lifted me up in the coach and gave an expression of doubt. I narrated to her the last night's account, And her eyes were wet when the train began to mount. She gave me a seat next to a window, And all I had was a gesture of gratitude to show. We passed the plains, the rivers and hills, Looking at which my mind started to chill. As the night started to fall, My heart was filled with fear of all. But I consoled myself with the sight of the window, Besides which I was sitting now and focusing on a meadow.

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Date: 10/16/2016 5:01:00 AM
A good one there! Love it...
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Date: 10/11/2016 1:37:00 PM
..."her eyes were wet when the train began to mount." I love the tone of this piece. Thanks for sharing ! W
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Date: 10/11/2016 1:17:00 PM
Loved the flow of this story. Waiting for me. Welcome to the soup.
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Date: 10/11/2016 1:17:00 PM
Waiting for more.
Date: 10/11/2016 8:38:00 AM
Your narrative is really engaging.... Congrats Akshat, for having your poem featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)
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Date: 7/16/2016 12:37:00 AM
Akshat, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/12/2016 12:15:00 PM
Akshat,, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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