From the Mouth of Babes

Just the other day
So out of the blue
My granddaughter says
I have a secret to tell you

With a  pensive look
She blurted out
I have evil inside of me
Said with a factual pout 

Why do you think that
I question gently
It's transferred from my doll
She said intently 

Your brain can make you think 
Many things that are not true
Show me your doll
I will examine her for you

I said, you are not evil
Your imagination is very strong 
I should not have told you grandma
I'm right and you are wrong 

With a little  huff
She scampered away
Left me with a smile
And some dismay 

November 19, 2019

For Contest ~ 2 to 12
Sponsor ~ Beth Evans

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 3/12/2020 5:58:00 AM
Oh, This resonates with me; reeks granddaughter! Love it.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/12/2020 7:40:00 AM
Happy you relate. Hugs
Date: 2/27/2020 12:34:00 PM
This good...is it true...It has vivid imagery...
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 2/27/2020 3:30:00 PM
Yes, this is a true story. Thanks for your comments. Hugs
Date: 1/17/2020 9:22:00 PM
Young or old, I'll never understand the thoughts that go through a women's mind (lol) But I think what your granddaughter is conveying, is.. I love you grandma! Lovely poem, Cecilia. Hugs Charlie
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Date: 1/4/2020 10:05:00 AM
Dropping by with ahi and a hug.
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Date: 1/1/2020 1:56:00 AM
Lolol she and my grandson could get into trouble I'd bet! How's it going over there Cilia?
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 1/10/2020 7:46:00 PM
I bet they would, lol. All is good. Hugs
Date: 1/1/2020 12:48:00 AM
Wow! This is great ?? love how this feels as I read ? so many good lines. :)
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 1/10/2020 7:40:00 PM
Thank you Muddasar. Hugs
Date: 12/8/2019 2:41:00 PM
wow, that is freaky that she believes that. Kind of scary! I mean, these days anything is possible, but let's just hope it was her imagination only!!
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Date: 12/6/2019 8:57:00 PM
Freaky things can come from the mouths of babes.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 1/10/2020 7:40:00 PM
Yes they can. Hugs
Date: 12/5/2019 8:56:00 PM
Whoa! So much revealed in this seemingly simple story... The Tug of War b/t Good and Evil... You've taken a grandiose theme and brought it down to earth. Bravo, Cecelia! Happy Thursday evening, Gershon
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 1/10/2020 7:42:00 PM
Thank you Gershon. Happy weekend to you. Hugs
Date: 12/1/2019 9:04:00 PM
Wow, this is different, a little scary, the poetry is excellent, and from the mouth of babe, can we but learn??
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 1/10/2020 7:43:00 PM
Thank you Harry. She keeps us on our toes. Always learning. Hugs
Date: 11/26/2019 9:16:00 AM
I agree w/Richard ... Very disturbingly good!! Such a valuable life lesson to really listen and observe our children. Ty for this startling fresh introspective write, Cecilia. Love and more love always.
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Date: 11/26/2019 8:10:00 AM
Oh my, this is disturbingly good. I see as well that it is a winner. Congrats and a hug Cecilia.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 1/10/2020 7:44:00 PM
Thank you Richard. Hugs
Date: 11/26/2019 3:48:00 AM
A charming poem and an amazing win. Congratulations dearest, Cecilia!
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 1/10/2020 7:44:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios. Hugs
Date: 11/21/2019 4:20:00 PM
Oh the joys of children...Ive and many similar experiences with children..
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 11/21/2019 4:48:00 PM
She is a joy and quite entertaining. Hugs
Date: 11/21/2019 4:00:00 PM
We live in a world that is becoming more crazy by the minute. All we can give is love and encouragement. You did the best you could under the circumstances and will have many chances to explore what this was about.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 11/21/2019 4:50:00 PM
Probably has forgotten already and moved on to another imaginary topic. Hugs
Date: 11/20/2019 4:38:00 PM
Amazing write Cecilia, truly incredible what a child comes out with. Fine penning!
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 11/21/2019 4:51:00 PM
Thank you Gordon. Hugs
Date: 11/20/2019 8:16:00 AM
Kids can say some of the strangest things that really leave of pondering and sometimes a little worried. Nicely penned Cecilia.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 11/21/2019 4:51:00 PM
Thank you Chris. Hugs
Date: 11/20/2019 5:50:00 AM
- They say a lot of weird .... but this one was a bit creepy, Cecilia :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 11/21/2019 4:56:00 PM
Hahaha, she has quite the imagination. Thanks Anne-Lise. Hugs
Date: 11/20/2019 4:38:00 AM
This was so sweet! Amazing what comes out the mouth of babes and this was amazing!;)
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 11/20/2019 5:36:00 AM
Thank you Brenda. Hugs
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