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From the Floor Up

as i get up off the floor im reaching for the front door off to school im rady to go , without breakfast but no one knows maybe i should skip school and get on the morning hustle , just for a dollar to get some food because im waking up off the floor hungry ,cold ,and body sore , but one day i will leave that floor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/22/2010 4:52:00 AM
Faith in anything you want out of life is the way to go. I really liked this.
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Date: 3/16/2010 5:23:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup James. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/12/2010 2:42:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all...as this delight tonight... nice write James..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 3/12/2010 1:46:00 PM
hope so!! keep sharing your heartfelt works with us.
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Date: 3/12/2010 11:46:00 AM
I don't want to lift my head from its home.... The pillow......Peace... Good work my friend....:JP]
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