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From the first moment I set my eyes on you my heart for you did glow My love for you ever since then just seems to continue steadly grow I know our love can just take us anywhere, any place I always want to see everyday and everywhere your face I want you to know that forever and ever I just love you And that for you my love and devotion will never stray I am aware that life can be at times hard but God made it simpler When HE gave you to me and thats when all my pain was easier to bear And now you and will just belong here and beyond together I like to think that you and I for each other will always care I can't even stand the thought of my life without you now We were meant to be together and let our love for each other just glow. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 November,13,2014

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Date: 11/13/2014 9:21:00 PM
nice poem Dorian. the rhyming was flawless
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