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From Starved, To Death

as travelers do i searched for food drifts of snow i fought my way through i came to a cabin deep in the woods i knocked politely as any man should there came no answer nobody is home i walked inside feeling ever alone a loaf of bread don't mind if i do my taste buds ignite and just as i chew the shot rang out i hit the floor the blood ran thick I'm hungry no more my body went numb now i cant see from starved, to death there's no saving me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/31/2012 5:57:00 PM
I am stunned! Congratulations on your featured work, Dillon!
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Dillon Lewis
Date: 2/1/2012 1:54:00 AM
thank you guys so much, i cant believe they actually featured one of mine :)
Date: 1/31/2012 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week!
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Date: 1/30/2012 8:45:00 AM
Dillon -- Very stunning bit of poetry. A wonderful choice to be featured. Kathy
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Date: 1/30/2012 6:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Dillon. Love, Carol
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