From Pain To Gain

Undeniable heartfelt love,
I'll do anything for you when push comes to shove.
Your a better person then I ever could be.
It's funny can't you see,
Your beauty is like the rain,
It calms me and takes away my pain and shame.
Let's face it I can be an *******.
But you do make me feel whole i hope you know.
Time has overcame the harsh fighting we have been through.
You never gave up and never fully were a shrew.
Your personality knocks me head over heels.
Your artistic ways my heart it steals.
I think we both will never understand the depth of how we truly feel.
All the emotional wounds in me slowly heal.
Your to blame,
lifting my pain,
making me sane,
My anger you have tamed.
But most of all you made me feel like I can love again.
That's one thing that makes my head spin.
Molly I hope were lucky I hope you the one for me.
The only girl my eyes will always see.
So lets now go take a rest.
When we wake I'll say those words once again,
"Your the best,
You are my muse,
The one in the end i hopefully choose."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 5/29/2009 9:28:00 AM
Made me cry....beautiful -Jessica
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Date: 5/27/2009 6:16:00 AM
Heartfelt well written poem.
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Date: 5/26/2009 8:03:00 AM
i think your molly is very proud of this like i am ......great write....love faire
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Date: 5/26/2009 6:16:00 AM
nice love poem! Light & Love
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Date: 5/24/2009 1:25:00 PM
OMG!!!! this poem actually made me tear.... it's so beautiful... Molly is such a lucky girl to have a guy like you. So passionate.
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Date: 5/21/2009 6:32:00 AM
This is a beautiful write Dustin! A lovely tribute to your love of Molly :)
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Date: 5/21/2009 6:16:00 AM
Awws this is to sweet is molly your gf i been wondering who the lucky grl was :) i wish yall the all but most best keep her close boi and never let her slip away she might just be that special one for you, you never know awsome poem....best wishes ~~(Emoo-Grl)~~
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