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From Dawn To Dusk

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The days are just not long enough to see all the beauty that surrounds us.

When I awake each early morning And my eyes adjust to dawn I see what Mother Nature's brought Today...there's rabbits on my lawn Tulips and roses of shades of red And yellow and pink carnations Flowers growing everywhere Beautiful - god creations A picturesque sky...way up high The rising of the sun Trails and trails from bunnies tails The rabbits on the run In fading moon - a kit raccoon... Hides beneath a tower Scared from chimes - ringing Church bells on the hour Soon the moon man hides his face And says good-bye - but not in brusque He says good day, live life...go play Before the day turns dusk Dusk or Dawn (New Poems Only) Poetry Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet 7/20/2018

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/30/2018 6:56:00 PM

G'day Charles … I do enjoy reading nature poems that fill with my mind with a picture that's simple to imagine. Your poem does this - thanks Charles - Lindsay

Charles Messina
Date: 7/30/2018 7:40:00 PM

That's a wonderful thing, Lindsay! Thank you for reading and glad you had a visit...I too love nature poems and words that paint a picture! Have a nice evening dear friend...Charlie

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 7/24/2018 5:19:00 AM

Charlie, a delightful verse and my kind of poetry! Thank you for the kind thought regarding my wife's passing. We had 66 wonderful years together. The best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob

Charles Messina
Date: 7/24/2018 5:44:00 AM

Hello Bob, thank you for your wonderful comments. That is just beautiful how long you and your wife have been together. I love hearing of long relationships. It is a rare thing these days with all the divorcing going around. I myself have been through two of them. She must have been a wonderful woman, I'm sure. My thoughts and prayers my friend...Chariie

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/23/2018 2:56:00 PM

How beautiful this is.

Charles Messina
Date: 7/23/2018 10:59:00 PM

Any time a can get two wonderful comments from the same beautiful person on one of my poems, is most rewarding...Thank you so much Charmaine!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/21/2018 8:43:00 AM

The wonders of nature seen at the start and finish of the day. Great verse Charlie. Tom

Charles Messina
Date: 7/21/2018 8:55:00 AM

Thank you Tom. Happy you enjoyed, always a pleasure to see your comments! Charlie

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/21/2018 3:23:00 AM

Delightful poem filled with superb imagery dear, Charles.

Charles Messina
Date: 7/21/2018 11:28:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios...your kind words and visit is much appreciated!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/21/2018 1:36:00 AM

What a lovely poets heart you have, Charles. It comes through softly, and with beautiful imagery in this poem. Good luck in the contest!

Charles Messina
Date: 7/21/2018 11:29:00 AM

Thank you for the wonderful comments, Caren! Much appreciated!

Carole Duet

Date: 7/20/2018 10:02:00 PM

An enchanting poem from beginning to end ("from dawn to dusk"). So lovely and easy to imagine.

Charles Messina
Date: 7/21/2018 11:30:00 AM

Thank you, Carole! Thanks for stopping by and for your lovely comments...:)

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/20/2018 5:39:00 PM

Charlie, your deep appreciation for the beauty of nature is evident in the tender expression of your lovely imagery. Such a delicate and intimate portrayal that's so beautiful my charming friend. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 7/20/2018 6:02:00 PM

Indeed, Charlie!.. and I hope you are enjoying a wonderful weekend as well.. Love and hugs with warmest wishes too! :))

Charles Messina
Date: 7/20/2018 5:51:00 PM

Susan, I have spent much of my childhood and adulthood exploring the wonderful sights of nature. A generous gift from god for us to enjoy. Thank you so much for your delightful and wonderful comments...Hoping you have a wonderful weekend...Love and hugs...Charlie :)

Kevin Shaw

Date: 7/20/2018 5:14:00 PM

Wonderful Imagery Charles, a gentle flowing poem, I hope you do well in the contest, regards, Kevin

Charles Messina
Date: 7/30/2018 7:56:00 PM

Thank you, Kevin...much appreciate your kind words and your visit, best regards...Charlie

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/20/2018 4:56:00 PM

How beautiful..You're a painter of words Charles.

Charles Messina
Date: 7/20/2018 5:56:00 PM

Thank you so much, Charmaine! I love when I can paint a picture for someone...especially when I don't use my brush! Thank you for your kind visit and I hope you have a wonderful weekend...All the best, Charlie