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The days are just not long enough to see all the beauty that surrounds us.

From Dawn To Dusk

When I awake each early morning
And my eyes adjust to dawn 
I see what Mother Nature's brought 
Today...there's rabbits on my lawn
 
Tulips and roses of shades of red 
And yellow and pink carnations 
Flowers growing everywhere 
Beautiful - god creations
 
A picturesque sky...way up high 
The rising of the sun 
Trails and trails from bunnies tails 
The rabbits on the run
 
In fading moon - a kit raccoon... 
Hides beneath a tower 
Scared from chimes - ringing 
Church bells on the hour
 
Soon the moon man hides his face 
And says good-bye - but not in brusque 
He says good day, live life...go play
Before the day turns dusk 

Dusk or Dawn (New Poems Only) Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Emile Pinet
7/20/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Laurie Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 6:56 PM
G'day Charles … I do enjoy reading nature poems that fill with my mind with a picture that's simple to imagine. Your poem does this - thanks Charles - Lindsay
Messina Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 7:40 PM
That's a wonderful thing, Lindsay! Thank you for reading and glad you had a visit...I too love nature poems and words that paint a picture! Have a nice evening dear friend...Charlie
Hinshaw Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 5:19 AM
Charlie, a delightful verse and my kind of poetry! Thank you for the kind thought regarding my wife's passing. We had 66 wonderful years together. The best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob
Messina Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 5:44 AM
Hello Bob, thank you for your wonderful comments. That is just beautiful how long you and your wife have been together. I love hearing of long relationships. It is a rare thing these days with all the divorcing going around. I myself have been through two of them. She must have been a wonderful woman, I'm sure. My thoughts and prayers my friend...Chariie
Chircop Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 2:56 PM
How beautiful this is.
Messina Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 10:59 PM
Any time a can get two wonderful comments from the same beautiful person on one of my poems, is most rewarding...Thank you so much Charmaine!
Cunningham Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 8:43 AM
The wonders of nature seen at the start and finish of the day. Great verse Charlie. Tom
Messina Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 8:55 AM
Thank you Tom. Happy you enjoyed, always a pleasure to see your comments! Charlie
Trifiatis Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 3:23 AM
Delightful poem filled with superb imagery dear, Charles.
Messina Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 11:28 AM
Thank you Demetrios...your kind words and visit is much appreciated!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 1:36 AM
What a lovely poets heart you have, Charles. It comes through softly, and with beautiful imagery in this poem. Good luck in the contest!
Messina Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 11:29 AM
Thank you for the wonderful comments, Caren! Much appreciated!
Duet Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 10:02 PM
An enchanting poem from beginning to end ("from dawn to dusk"). So lovely and easy to imagine.
Messina Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 11:30 AM
Thank you, Carole! Thanks for stopping by and for your lovely comments...:)
Ashley Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 5:39 PM
Charlie, your deep appreciation for the beauty of nature is evident in the tender expression of your lovely imagery. Such a delicate and intimate portrayal that's so beautiful my charming friend. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 6:02 PM
Indeed, Charlie!.. and I hope you are enjoying a wonderful weekend as well.. Love and hugs with warmest wishes too! :))
Messina Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 5:51 PM
Susan, I have spent much of my childhood and adulthood exploring the wonderful sights of nature. A generous gift from god for us to enjoy. Thank you so much for your delightful and wonderful comments...Hoping you have a wonderful weekend...Love and hugs...Charlie :)
Shaw Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 5:14 PM
Wonderful Imagery Charles, a gentle flowing poem, I hope you do well in the contest, regards, Kevin
Messina Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 7:56 PM
Thank you, Kevin...much appreciate your kind words and your visit, best regards...Charlie
Chircop Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 4:56 PM
How beautiful..You're a painter of words Charles.
Messina Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 5:56 PM
Thank you so much, Charmaine! I love when I can paint a picture for someone...especially when I don't use my brush! Thank you for your kind visit and I hope you have a wonderful weekend...All the best, Charlie
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