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From Antarctica

a glacial lake reflecting snow- capped mountains... mirror image dripping water suddenly frozen... ice sculptures two penguins waddling through snow... happy family antarctica inside my bed room... animal planet © kash poet ==================== Placement: 3rd; (Dec.2011) Contest:Pictures of Winter Sponsor:john freeman

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John Freeman

Date: 12/6/2011 1:04:00 PM

Four vivid pictures of the winter beauty and a fitting closing line."antarctica inside my bed room... animal planet" Thinks for sharing your gems, Kash. Agape, Moses

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/6/2011 8:49:00 AM

A great write Kash. Congratulations

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/6/2011 7:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Pictures of winter" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/6/2011 6:05:00 AM

Hi Kashi,,,2 lil penguins as a happy family and these sudden ice sculptures...grrrreat images. Congrats to you! :0 Gwendolen

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/6/2011 1:27:00 AM

Congrats on your win x

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/5/2011 9:07:00 AM

a slew of fantastic 'kus, akshi buddy... i will go for 2 and 3 though as a whole, a galactic experience! :) huggs

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/4/2011 5:44:00 PM

LOL the site doesn't seem to like our cut paste in the formating of these haiku strings! [last one I don't get the juxtaposed line?] 2 is my favorite! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2011 3:37:00 PM

So is all this from watching Animal Planet, Kash? It shows you really enjoyed yourself and saw some great scenes of Antarctica. Did you ever see the movie about Penguins? I think it was called Walk of the Penguins, something like that. It so amazed me, I wrote four poems about it afterward! I think the best of this set are number 2 and 4! But all are very nice.

M.I.A .

Date: 12/4/2011 12:27:00 AM

the images here are simply beautiful. i liked the fact that it's inside your room...

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/3/2011 9:57:00 PM

I love these picturesque haiku, Kash. I especially like the penguins. Kim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/3/2011 8:14:00 PM

Hello again Kash, I love every haiku.. you display here.. and about the word.. Izzat..in my poem i used it as an honor meaning... thank you for asking... take care and have yourself a wonderful night,..p.d.