Kash Poet Poet Haiku

From Antarctica

a glacial lake
reflecting snow- capped mountains...
mirror image

dripping water
suddenly frozen...
ice sculptures

two penguins
waddling through snow...
happy family
 
antarctica
inside my bed room...
animal planet




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Placement: 3rd; (Dec.2011)

Contest:Pictures of Winter

Sponsor:john freeman

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John Freeman December 6, 2011 at 1:04 PM Four vivid pictures of the winter beauty and a fitting closing line."antarctica inside my bed room... animal planet" Thinks for sharing your gems, Kash. Agape, Moses

Bob Quigley December 6, 2011 at 8:49 AM A great write Kash. Congratulations

Carol Sunshine Brown December 6, 2011 at 7:58 AM Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Pictures of winter" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song December 6, 2011 at 6:05 AM Hi Kashi,,,2 lil penguins as a happy family and these sudden ice sculptures...grrrreat images. Congrats to you! :0 Gwendolen

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 6, 2011 at 1:27 AM Congrats on your win x

Nette Onclaud December 5, 2011 at 9:07 AM a slew of fantastic 'kus, akshi buddy... i will go for 2 and 3 though as a whole, a galactic experience! :) huggs

Debbie Guzzi December 4, 2011 at 5:44 PM LOL the site doesn't seem to like our cut paste in the formating of these haiku strings! [last one I don't get the juxtaposed line?] 2 is my favorite! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich December 4, 2011 at 3:37 PM So is all this from watching Animal Planet, Kash? It shows you really enjoyed yourself and saw some great scenes of Antarctica. Did you ever see the movie about Penguins? I think it was called Walk of the Penguins, something like that. It so amazed me, I wrote four poems about it afterward! I think the best of this set are number 2 and 4! But all are very nice.

M.I.A . December 4, 2011 at 12:27 AM the images here are simply beautiful. i liked the fact that it's inside your room...

Kim Merryman December 3, 2011 at 9:57 PM I love these picturesque haiku, Kash. I especially like the penguins. Kim

Poet Destroyer A December 3, 2011 at 8:14 PM Hello again Kash, I love every haiku.. you display here.. and about the word.. Izzat..in my poem i used it as an honor meaning... thank you for asking... take care and have yourself a wonderful night,..p.d.