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Frolicking In the Dark

Frolicking in the Dark

 
witches on wild brooms,
black cats with red, hungry eyes -
daylight on the way

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Luke Hobbs

Date: 9/3/2018 5:49:00 AM

I like the way that you use mirrored vowel sounds in the lines to give a chiming effect and the start contrast of the last line.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/3/2018 8:05:00 AM

Hi Luke, it is great to hear from you an receive your insightful and inspirational comments! Thank you very much! Best regards. Pandita

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/4/2014 9:33:00 AM

Hi Pandita ! 'black cats with red, hungry eyes' out there how can I frolic? Love. Wonderful haiku.God bless ....rajat

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/3/2018 8:02:00 AM

Oh my goodness, I didn't realize that you had commented on this piece almost four years ago! Thank you so much my dear friend! Hugs. Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 8/29/2014 10:44:00 PM

I like Halloween and this is scary great! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/29/2014 11:34:00 PM

After doing this one, I don't know if I have anything left to write about Halloween:-) Perhaps, I'll get some inspiration when the time comes! LOL! Pandita

Robin Davis

Date: 6/27/2014 11:32:00 PM

Pandita What a wild and scary poem that is full of imagination and fun. Thank you for the nice comment on my Yellow Treat poem.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/28/2014 4:34:00 PM

Robin, my friend, thank you for your kind comments and compliments! I am glad that you enjoyed this one. Best wishes always.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2014 11:32:00 PM

just now seeing the comment you made to me down here. Yes, it is discouraging when some of our poems do not get as many comments as others. I notice If I post two in one day, the first one rarely gets as many as the second one!!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/21/2014 1:57:00 PM

You are so right about that - for better viewing, it is more strategic to post one at a time, thus, possibly increasing the chances that each poem may be viewed. Thanks, my friend!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2014 10:37:00 PM

ooooh, I love that imagery of red hungry eyes, I can't remember if you were someone that read my midnight triolet. but that one is about my black cat and I guess most of the readers are not getting it. hahaha I LIKE black cat poems like this one.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/16/2014 7:32:00 AM

Hi Andrea, I am so glad you like this one because as you can see not too many people commented on it and I was afraid that it wasn't well-received. So your compliments mean a lot to me! Warmest regards.

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