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The fog frolicked in the hollow Danced upon the verdant grass Reached down to kiss sleeping leaves Before its time to pass Laughter echoed from the woods afar Wildlife playing steel guitars Birds sang a tune to blended keys Their music a groov'n jar The sun through the haze tops the pines Fog has settled entertwined Stillness prevails quiet disturbed By manmade motors fine The radiant beams of morn's sun Filters through fogs clammy gray Soon the heat will fill the moist air The poet's night turns to day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/26/2017 2:33:00 PM
oh, I could see & almost hear this! Thanks for my place in your contest, my friend - so glad you liked it.
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Date: 7/29/2017 4:59:00 PM
Very beautiful imagery; another "fav" of mine.
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Date: 7/22/2017 5:14:00 AM
The picture painted as I did read, for those moments I could see. Terrific Sara!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/22/2017 7:35:00 AM
Mark,I am glad that my work made it plain so that you could view nature through my eyes..Your presence at my page is uplifting.Sara
Date: 7/22/2017 1:25:00 AM
Fun frolicking of nature, and the poet has captured it excellently:) good job, Sara, love the second stanza:)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/22/2017 7:34:00 AM
Jo, I enjoyed writing that second stanza..I know though that in nature it is a constant battle just to stay alive..It is nice to think that they are living a life of enjoyment though..Thanks for your visit..Sara
Date: 7/21/2017 7:10:00 PM
What a beautifully crafted poem Sara! :) I enjoyed it.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/22/2017 7:30:00 AM
Heidi, Thanks for your review of my work..I appreciate your stopping by..Glad that I gave you some enjoyment for the day..Sara
Date: 7/21/2017 6:41:00 PM
Mrs Sara, a poet's poem. I was smiling as I was reading because i could see you were having so much fun writing it. It came through in your wonderful choice of words. Superb poetry:):)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/22/2017 7:28:00 AM
Daniel, I did enjoy writing this one..I went out on the porch two days to get it done though..I started one then started another one and worked them together..So two morns on the porch..I don't get to go out there as much any more..I miss my time out on the porch..Thanks for your kind review..Sara
Date: 7/21/2017 5:44:00 PM
Beautifully written my friend! I have missed reading your grandiose works of nature Sara! I am glad that I got to come and read your glorious poetry here! Your piece is truly amazing! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this afternoon! Great Work!!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/22/2017 7:26:00 AM
Russell, I saw your name on a person poem yesterday and I put it on my list to see if you had posted a new work..Missed seeing you for a long time..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

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