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Frog

Frog chasing a fly leap to catch it and plop! In deep well he fell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/17/2010 1:43:00 PM
Like the Haiku..Feel for the frog..Feel for the people who will realize in a few days that something has died in the well...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 8/16/2010 9:30:00 PM
oh, this one made me laught a little . Poor froggie! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/21/2010 2:51:00 AM
haha very cute! and I could almost here that frog go "plop!" --an extra "i" in plop though--really enjoyed this, thanks! -- nikko :)
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Date: 6/20/2010 2:03:00 AM
lol, cute frog haiku. You could consider changing the word 'phew' into something that sounds like the frog falling into the water (a splash, or a plop - just a thought). It's entirely upto you of course, thanks for the smile this one brings ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 5/1/2010 5:32:00 AM
impressive read about the frog who does not think before he leaps, nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 4/27/2010 8:29:00 PM
Bit of humor for us to enjoy. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/22/2010 5:58:00 AM
Juan, This imagery is very clear and the cute poem gave me a chuckle. "Ploip" ...I even heard the water dollop as the frog hit it. Thoroughly enjoyed this lighthearted view of nature. Actually one of my favorites!
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Date: 4/22/2010 4:49:00 AM
uhoh!! poor fella, guess the snakes needed a meal.
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Date: 4/21/2010 10:30:00 PM
That's the price he paid, enjoyed, thank you
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