Frog

Frog chasing a fly                                               
leap to catch it and plop!                                
In deep well he fell

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Sara Kendrick

October 17, 2010 at 1:43 PM

Like the Haiku..Feel for the frog..Feel for the people who will realize in a few days that something has died in the well...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

August 16, 2010 at 9:30 PM

oh, this one made me laught a little . Poor froggie! LUv, Andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

June 21, 2010 at 2:51 AM

haha very cute! and I could almost here that frog go "plop!" --an extra "i" in plop though--really enjoyed this, thanks! -- nikko :)

Sharon Tideswell

June 20, 2010 at 2:03 AM

lol, cute frog haiku. You could consider changing the word 'phew' into something that sounds like the frog falling into the water (a splash, or a plop - just a thought). It's entirely upto you of course, thanks for the smile this one brings ~ Sharon :)

Poet Destroyer A

May 1, 2010 at 5:32 AM

impressive read about the frog who does not think before he leaps, nice one,..p.d.

April 27, 2010 at 8:29 PM

Bit of humor for us to enjoy. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Kim M

April 22, 2010 at 5:58 AM

Juan, This imagery is very clear and the cute poem gave me a chuckle. "Ploip" ...I even heard the water dollop as the frog hit it. Thoroughly enjoyed this lighthearted view of nature. Actually one of my favorites!