Frog 1 and 2 - Haiku

Frog 1 And 2 – Haiku


          Frog 1

lights, stage, action, shoot
frog sings opera, hat, cane 
Saturday cartoons


          Frog 2

riveting story
jumping to conclusions, sad
frog misses pad, croaks
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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November 16, 2014 at 11:12 AM
Wow!!! Great and humorous (for those who know the well-known Basho haiku!)
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November 16, 2014 at 12:32 PM
Hi Vassilis, Thank you so much for your kind words. This was one of those projects that I had to sleep on. When I woke up I realized it was two poems struggling within on structure. I set them both free this morning and let them go their separate ways. I am glad you liked them. Earl
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November 16, 2014 at 6:23 AM
O all hell broke loose on poor frog..applicable to all of us as well. Message is universal.Great haiku Love take care Earl XXXXX rajat
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November 16, 2014 at 6:54 AM
Hi Rajat, Thank you so much for your kind words. As you say; this is applicable to us all. It was a fun write. Have a great week end. Earl
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