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Fritillary

I flit and flutter on the wind blown as the spirit leads, drawn by colour and intense needs, my journee erratically unfolds- I alight,spread my wings, in still life,to make poets sing. A sixain inspired by a garden view on holdiday recently and by Wordsworth poem 'The Butterfly

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Date: 8/4/2010 8:33:00 PM
Magnificent title.. and the butterfly is truly a brilliant creation of God.. your words are too Brian..with luv..
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Date: 7/31/2010 5:05:00 AM
Interesting short verse...Like the count and number six lines..Makes it short and easy to read..Glad that you were inspired so that you could share with us..Sara
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Date: 7/31/2010 2:01:00 AM
lovey poem Brian (I guess I must stay late night early morning (for me at least) to catch you!)
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