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Written: September 08, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ In the realm of fearless pranks, we meet, Where weakfish lump and teardrops greet. A sluice of inducement we embark upon, With words that excoriate as a lethal swan. With a droplet of grit and a split decision, We dismantle our panic with precision. Such a weak swimming against the tide, We defy expectations; we won't hide. In this realm of a daring escapade, We flare a trail, unafraid. Raze the doubts, raze the walls, Letting our spirit freely sprawl. An escapade, a venture, a thrilling bout, Shoots of adrenaline, there's no doubt. Through each channel, we navigate, Teasing danger, embracing fate Each hint of chutzpah and boldness. We tame fears if we're brave and relentless. But beware, for along this path we tread, There are lacerations that can't be fled. The journey may leave us fractured and worn. But in those moments, true strength is born. Such a broken teardrop, we may feel the pain. But we gather our courage, ready to regain. Through the smoke of depreciation and doubt, We emerge, displacing the fears that shout. With chloropicrin in our veins, we prevail. Indenting our mark, leaving no trail. In this realm of daring escapades, We find solace in being unswayed. Even in chaos, we discover peace. Plucked delight as lachrymator release.

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Date: 9/9/2023 2:56:00 PM
Beautiful writing, Sotto! Loved it!
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Date: 9/9/2023 7:15:00 AM
Oh dear Sotto, this is such a breathtaking and deep write hued with philosophical reflections of your mind and worded with pure wisdom that one should definitely try to comprehend. I'm endlessly in awe of the magnificence that this write has sprinkled upon my heart, truly unparalleled.. It's definitely when we break the hardest, we rise with the utmost power and resilience only of we have the will to conquer the darkness.. There are so many vivid and evocative lines here, definitely a fav!
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Date: 9/9/2023 4:43:00 AM
The journey may leave us fractured and worn. But in those moments, true strength is born---wise words that inspire confidence to face hurdle of life. Splendid thoughts, my friend.
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Date: 9/9/2023 3:33:00 AM
Dear Sotto, it is during those vulnerable moments we gather and find strength to face everything. How philosophical and poetic this is. I love the way you’ve written fractured we may be through journey that leave us worn out, but solace through escapades we do find. Your ink never would run dry, another brilliant profound poem this is. I absolutely loved reading. You always leave me in awe. Especially those rhymes, are so good. Wishing you a beautiful weekend.
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Date: 9/9/2023 1:35:00 AM
Superb poem where images flow incessantly. Eloquent craft in a poem that should be well appreciated.
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Date: 9/9/2023 1:00:00 AM
What a beautifully haunting poem
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