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Steeple lit by lightning loud Moon that's full peeks round a cloud Trudging through the churchyard mud Unwise shortcut: THUD, THUD, THUD! The sound is muted ’neath my feet No one there I wish to meet Sodden hair and soaked to skin Contemplate my every sin Thunder, lightning, crackling air Time to hightail out of there Prickling skin: can’t hang around Portentous skies and groaning ground Slipping sliding progress thwarted Planned escape at once aborted Through the storm the church bells chime Shadowed figure… asks the time Where he came from I don’t know Neither did I see him go Stood alone in worsened shower Still his voice enquires the hour Flight, not fight my first reaction Once my feet acquired traction Reached the exit P.D.Q. Asked the time by who knows who Homeward through the icy rain Darkness asks the time again Local paper on the mat Front page headline tells us that Town remembers Howard Peak, Funeral was held this week Police have found no weapon nor The watch that he was murdered for

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Date: 10/12/2021 8:36:00 PM
Crikey Terry ... you just keep coming up with goods. The flow and rhyme is terrific and of course the question finale is there to think about - thanks again Terry - Lindsay
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Date: 10/13/2021 2:45:00 AM
Actually didn’t know the end until I got there. Would he have been late for something? Would he be waiting for someone? The stolen watch just came out of nowhere but (if I may say so myself) just worked. Cheers Lindsay. Terry
Date: 10/12/2021 1:19:00 AM
It seems my comment disappeared so again I will say it made my skin crawl.
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Date: 10/12/2021 6:15:00 AM
I have that effect on women! Thanks, Jenna.
Date: 10/11/2021 11:30:00 PM
Quite a spooky tale for Halloween Terry, reminds me to get some goodies in for the neighbourhood brats that threaten you with green slime if you don't treat them lol. Tom
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Terry Flood
Date: 10/12/2021 11:02:00 AM
Just turn off all the lights and hide behind the sofa… works for me ;-)

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