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Friendship Shield

(20/07/2011) Are those tears on your cheek? What’s the blank doing in your eyes? How can you be this weak? You know cry is enough than cries You were as bright as the stars And as solid as iron Now look at your scars Do you have any particular reason? Why the pain stroked you? For truth only, please, share me the clue Why you keep running, Toward ambiguity instead of reality? Can’t you just try not sobbing? Hurt, is only feasibility Come to me and be opened Closer to me and you’ll be listened Let me hold you And together we can get through

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/23/2012 7:07:00 AM
Last line....And together we can get through---that is friendship!I have a Friendship poem to Dinda.:) oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/15/2012 7:07:00 PM
wow Dinda, the last stanza was coup de grace! it really take the piece the whole new understanding. great write! thank you for your visit and kind comments
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Date: 8/14/2011 12:37:00 AM
you put a smile on my face with this one 7up!!:)
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Date: 8/11/2011 11:04:00 PM
I am stopping by this evening to thank you for your kind comments while the soup is up and running. I will never get caught up oh well that's life right? Have a wonderful evening Dinda. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2011 3:49:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Dinda. Will be back again soon to read more of it. Love, Carol
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