Dinda Minardi Poet Rhyme

Friendship Shield

(20/07/2011)

Are those tears on your cheek?
What’s the blank doing in your eyes?
How can you be this weak?
You know cry is enough than cries

You were as bright as the stars
And as solid as iron
Now look at your scars
Do you have any particular reason?
Why the pain stroked you?
For truth only, please, share me the clue

Why you keep running,
Toward ambiguity instead of reality?
Can’t you just try not sobbing?
Hurt, is only feasibility
Come to me and be opened
Closer to me and you’ll be listened
Let me hold you
And together we can get through

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Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2012 at 7:07 AM Last line....And together we can get through---that is friendship!I have a Friendship poem to Dinda.:) oxox love Anne-Lise

M.I.A . January 15, 2012 at 7:07 PM wow Dinda, the last stanza was coup de grace! it really take the piece the whole new understanding. great write! thank you for your visit and kind comments

John Castro August 14, 2011 at 12:37 AM you put a smile on my face with this one 7up!!:)

Carol Sunshine Brown August 11, 2011 at 11:04 PM I am stopping by this evening to thank you for your kind comments while the soup is up and running. I will never get caught up oh well that's life right? Have a wonderful evening Dinda. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown August 11, 2011 at 3:49 PM I enjoyed reading your poetry today Dinda. Will be back again soon to read more of it. Love, Carol