Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

Friendship

You said age's only a number, beauty's skin deep
Wise words to live by, now if I could only sleep
Humor never can be taken away, have no regrets
Live like there's no tomorrow, an elephant never forgets

Since the day we met, things have been so right
Thankful for our meeting, making spirits bright
No more feeling lonely, no more feeling stressed
Friendships have started, I am feeling blessed

Not a day has passed without a smile on my face
Feeling happy has now become commonplace
Brought together by chance or was it by fate
Any way you put it, my friend, you are truly great

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Paul Schneiter October 4, 2016 at 2:49 PM This is a compelling, touching tribute to the value--and power--of authentic friendship. I love the message, rhyme scheme, and flow. Excellent, Tim, through and through.

Estela Canama June 15, 2015 at 5:18 AM Friends are blessings that must be treasured forever. We live a colorful life because of their earnest care. This is a wonderful and inspiring poem on friendship.

Thomas Carney November 30, 2014 at 8:34 AM Real friendship always lasts, but internet friendships is a whole new ball of wax, and I have failed in this area. I seem to lose friends and acquaintances, anger towards me, like I did something wrong, accusations, geeese, I give up on it--is too stressful. Buddies in real person appear to know one better. On the flip side, I enjoy reading and writing poetry, and yours is no different. Nice rhymed poem on a plausible subject. Thomas Tim Smith November 30, 2014 at 2:02 PM Thanks Thomas....It is easier to show anger behind the safety of a computer than it is in person..I think people don't think about others feelings before saying/writing something.

Eve Roper October 13, 2014 at 11:17 PM Friendships are great especially if they last :) eve Tim Smith October 14, 2014 at 4:05 PM That is true Eve...we need to cherish them...hugs Tim

Richard Nnoli October 13, 2014 at 1:45 PM this is a great poem, richard Tim Smith October 13, 2014 at 1:47 PM Thank you Richard....cheers Tim

Margaret Franceschini October 13, 2014 at 1:32 PM mutual attachment in friendships are sacred and should last a lifetime, here you show such appreciation in this that all should read and see the truth in friendships. thank you so much for revealing such emotions Tim Smith October 13, 2014 at 1:50 PM Hi Margaret...Thanks for the wonderful comment...Good friends should be treasured....hugs Tim

Rohini Perumal October 9, 2014 at 2:34 AM impressive and true words about friendship. Tim Smith October 9, 2014 at 6:13 AM Thank you rohini.....Tim

Estela Canama September 30, 2014 at 7:30 AM This is an awe-inspiring friendship poem. Friend is a precious gift from God. Tim Smith September 30, 2014 at 7:40 AM Thank you Estela....hugs Tim

Lionel Ledbetter September 29, 2014 at 11:11 PM I like this poem. That's just what friend's are for. Tim Smith September 29, 2014 at 11:28 PM They truly are Lionel .....cheers

Richard Lamoureux September 26, 2014 at 9:16 AM Top five! Pretty impressive Tim!

Richard Breese September 24, 2014 at 9:00 PM You get a perfect rating for this one. Tim Smith September 24, 2014 at 10:18 PM Thank you Richard... Cheers Tim

Nette Onclaud September 15, 2014 at 11:34 AM my, this is filled with fondness and the flow of your lines just gets me... spectacular,tim.. huggs Tim Smith September 15, 2014 at 12:39 PM Thanks nette...I deeply love my good friend here...hugs Tim

Len Gasun September 15, 2014 at 10:43 AM Wow! A very awesome poem on friendship my dear friend Tim. I love it and taking it to my fave. Friendship is a treasure and so this poem of yours is. Thank you so much my dear friend Tim. Thanks so much as well for your warm visit and encouraging comments on my poem. More blessings! love lots and big hugs, Leonora Tim Smith September 15, 2014 at 12:37 PM Oh Leonora how sweet and kind....many big Hugs Tim :)

Casarah Nance September 15, 2014 at 7:30 AM That is sweet old man ;) you are a treasure, wonderful poem ;) Tim Smith September 15, 2014 at 7:47 AM You misspelled bold :) hugs sweets

Charmaine Chircop September 15, 2014 at 5:23 AM Age is indeed a number,and b beauty is skin deep.Yes I believe it wholeheartedly.Its the soul and heart which make us who We are..And tomorrows?Of course life is what We make it,and its short ,Lets make each breath counts.I am going to.favour this beauty, Its speaks sincierely as true friends are. Tim Smith September 15, 2014 at 7:49 AM Yes lets make each breath count... Thanks Charma..... Hugs Tim

Demetrios Trifiatis September 15, 2014 at 5:14 AM Yes, Tim, friendship is a treasure that should be appreciated for with it we could buy happiness! Just well-thought poem of friendship! Inspiring! Tim Smith September 15, 2014 at 7:50 AM Thank you my dear friend....cheers Tim

Jan Allison September 15, 2014 at 1:14 AM Hi Tim this is so lovely its a 7 and faves for me :-) Hugs Jan/Stan or am I Maurice - oh heck I'm confused Charmaine Chircop September 15, 2014 at 5:19 AM : ) Tim Smith September 15, 2014 at 1:16 AM Lol...thanks Jan....hugs Tim

Maurice Yvonne September 14, 2014 at 9:58 PM Great write. From your heart. Happy you have a friend makes you happy. I know I'm glad your here. Just wouldn't be the same soup. Tim Smith September 14, 2014 at 11:01 PM Wait is this Jan.....there some great people here....cheers