Jared Pickett Poet Triolet

Friends With Benefits

Triolet

*Friend with Benefits*


This mountain girl raised in the hills,
A friend with benefits turned more.
No attachments, detached, until.
This mountain girl raised in the hills
A perfect shot, can't get my fill
She tastes like sweet cherry liqueur
This mountain girl raised in the hills,
A friend with benefits turned more.



Jared Pickett
3/17/2014
Asavvy1

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Charmaine Chircop March 19, 2014 at 11:24 PM She tastes like sweet cherry liquer...I love that line..and the imagery of this girl raised far from the city..Lovely. Jared Pickett March 20, 2014 at 12:19 PM My beautiful Charma, thank you for visiting me today. It is always nice to see you.. Asavvy1

Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2014 at 8:38 AM - A good poem to share with friends :) - Thank you, Jared. - Well done. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Jared Pickett March 20, 2014 at 12:18 PM Appreciate your warm comments friend. Thank you!!Asavvy1

Poet Destroyer A March 17, 2014 at 11:39 PM Hi Jared, wow, no attachment. Sweet cherry liqueur. It sound sweet, and too good to be true... Enjoyed the Triolet :)...LINDA Jared Pickett March 18, 2014 at 7:55 AM It sounds good, even better when shown!! Thank you for stopping by!!Asavvy1

Juli- Michelle March 17, 2014 at 10:22 AM Beautifully penned poem. Glad I stopped by today. Great write :) Have a good one. -Juli-Michelle Jared Pickett March 18, 2014 at 7:56 AM Thank you for stopping in and reading my work. I will be by to visit your work a little later after work!!Asavvy1