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Friends With Benefits

Triolet *Friend with Benefits* This mountain girl raised in the hills, A friend with benefits turned more. No attachments, detached, until. This mountain girl raised in the hills A perfect shot, can't get my fill She tastes like sweet cherry liqueur This mountain girl raised in the hills, A friend with benefits turned more. Jared Pickett 3/17/2014 Asavvy1

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/19/2014 11:24:00 PM

She tastes like sweet cherry liquer...I love that line..and the imagery of this girl raised far from the city..Lovely.

Jared Pickett
Date: 3/20/2014 12:19:00 PM

My beautiful Charma, thank you for visiting me today. It is always nice to see you.. Asavvy1

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/18/2014 8:38:00 AM

- A good poem to share with friends :) - Thank you, Jared. - Well done. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jared Pickett
Date: 3/20/2014 12:18:00 PM

Appreciate your warm comments friend. Thank you!!Asavvy1

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/17/2014 11:39:00 PM

Hi Jared, wow, no attachment. Sweet cherry liqueur. It sound sweet, and too good to be true... Enjoyed the Triolet :)...LINDA

Jared Pickett
Date: 3/18/2014 7:55:00 AM

It sounds good, even better when shown!! Thank you for stopping by!!Asavvy1

Juli- Michelle

Date: 3/17/2014 10:22:00 AM

Beautifully penned poem. Glad I stopped by today. Great write :) Have a good one. -Juli-Michelle

Jared Pickett
Date: 3/18/2014 7:56:00 AM

Thank you for stopping in and reading my work. I will be by to visit your work a little later after work!!Asavvy1