Caroline Cécile Delacroix Poet Cinquain

Friends For All Time

For Carolyn D

A friend
For you I am
Like a closest member
Of the family, as you are
To me.

With that
When you're hurt
I feel the pain enter 
But left with no way to make things
Better.

Helpless
Is what I feel
No matter what I say
meaningless words, bring no change, and
I pray.

That God
Shows you the way
To a beautiful place
In the sun, and where within, peace
Will reign.

By CarolineCecile
Copyright © 09/03/11

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Matthew Anish September 7, 2011 at 2:42 PM Fine use of form - and you ended on an optimistic note - which is all to the good. Thank you for your kind words. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Carolyn Devonshire September 4, 2011 at 5:39 PM Dear Caroline, thanks so much for the kind thoughts you expressed so beautifully in this poem. If I do get to Sacramento, I'll make sure to let you know ahead of time. I know eventually, I will rest in peace. Please don't despair, dear, I am coping with this much better now. Love you, Carolyn