Cory Long Poet Rhyme

Friends

Friends are there when things get dark
Friends are around when you wanna give up
Friends feel your tears when you cry
they are there for you to hide.
When the world outside is cold and creul.
your head is spinning like a top.
When you wanna turn and run
extend your hand
and you'll find
a friend waiting for you tonight.

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Carol Eastman April 27, 2012 at 1:45 PM A wonderful thought and poem on friendshop... so well thought out.

Harry Horsman April 22, 2012 at 3:57 AM like this Cory, wonderful poem. harry

Brenda Victoria Northeast April 10, 2012 at 6:26 PM Yes friends God's extended hand, loved your Write Cory, thank you, Bren : )

Nette Onclaud April 10, 2012 at 4:37 PM you got may full attention here, cory... beautifully scribed!.. that's what friends are for... rated A for awesome!..:) huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 8, 2012 at 6:13 PM gonna "biter" a poet and enter my contrest.. all are having loads of fun.. and so many poets left to "nibble at luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 8, 2012 at 6:12 PM cory u know u always have a friend here on PS.. u are a special friend to all who need one too.. lovely words express the inner core of your heart so good ..so true.. luv.. we had a wonderful day.. how about u???

Anne-Lise Andresen April 8, 2012 at 7:52 AM Very well written Cory, take care of your friends. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Poet Destroyer A April 5, 2012 at 10:30 PM nice... always..pd

Carolyn Devonshire April 5, 2012 at 3:31 PM The benefits of friendship are many, Cory. As you describe so beautifully, they are there when you need them and they will hold you up if you feel you're going to fall. I could use a friend, Cory. Perhaps one will be "waiting for (me) tonight." Excellent! Love, Carolyn