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Look very closely and without any fears.. you will see my thoughts inside my tears Always a frown and never a smile i wish i was happy if just for a while All i hear is cheer up hun.. but it would be different if they were the one Who cried most nights and faked smiles all day and this horrible feeling just wont go away All though when my friends help i feel a little better thats why their amazing and ill love them forever.

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Date: 5/18/2009 9:13:00 AM
a great poem Katie, i would not be anything without my firends
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Date: 5/17/2009 9:05:00 PM
Dear Katie,Welcome to the SOUP YOU will receive much support from YOUR Fellow Soupers This is a beautiful Rhyme POEM A word of advice Try to stay away from The I do not know? form of POETRY Less people will read YOU and YOU won't be considered in any POETRY SOUP CONTESTS InThe Resources Section on the left of the screen is Forms of POETRY YOU should look through it Again WELCOME ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 5/17/2009 7:13:00 PM
Beautiful write here! Friends are important because they help you grow as a person! Welcome to the soup! Jeremiah
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