Friend Or Enemy

When someone forms an enemy,
the harder it is for them to be free,
their heart is clouded by so much hate,
their mind stays closed until it's too late.

When someone forms a brand new friend,
the easier it is for them to lend,
their heart filled with so much love,
their mind as open as the skies above.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 8:51 AM
Way to go girl..Enjoyed reading your work..Congrats on your win..Sara
Rimmer Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 6:28 PM
Thank you everyone!
Dietrich Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 6:07 PM
this has a great happy message. congrats on your win.
Quigley Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 8:53 AM
Congratulations on your win Caitlin. Look forward to more in the future.
Brown Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 6:09 AM
Congratulations on the win in Brian's "UPTO Fourteen" contest Caitlin. Love, Carol
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January 24, 2012 at 10:53 AM
Agree.... very well done.I have a Friendship poem..../.....welcome to reading it Caitlin. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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