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Friend In Grey Coat

in haste for ever scurrying friend in grey coat boisterous to watch February 2, 2022 "Squirrel Haiku" Premiere Poetry Contest Sponsor: Robert James Liquori Syllables (5-7-5) checked by HMS.com NINTH PLACE Strand - 1066 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/5/2022 12:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your second win. A fun squirrel Haiku write. Have a blessed day/weekend..........................

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/4/2022 9:12:00 PM

It is amazing to watch them move so quickly. I have tried to photograph them when I am in California and once in a while they will stop long enough for me to capture them with my camera. Congratulations on your wonderful winning haiku Mala. Blessings xxoo

Robert James Liguori

Date: 2/3/2022 11:47:00 AM

very descriptive. congrats on placing!

Jan Allison

Date: 2/3/2022 10:55:00 AM

lovely imagery Malabika, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/3/2022 11:01:00 AM

Thanks, Jan. Really appreciate your sweet words - make my day! Hugs ~ Mala

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/3/2022 10:53:00 AM

Hi Mala! Congratulations on your "boisterous" win! Love your word choices! They so vividly describe your "scurrying friend." Blessings!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/3/2022 11:00:00 AM

Thanks, Sam. Ha ha - "Boisterous win" - beautiful! Love and hugs.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/3/2022 6:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful "Haiku." They are so much fun to watch. Have a blessed day.....................

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/3/2022 8:24:00 AM

Thank you so much, Paula. Appreciate your beautiful words. Yes, Squirrels are fun.

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 2/3/2022 2:07:00 AM

Congrats Mala on your win! We have a few squirrels in our garden. Never tired of watching them!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/3/2022 8:25:00 AM

Thank you, Krish. We have Squirrels in our garden. I love watching them in summer.

Brian Sambourne

Date: 2/2/2022 7:53:00 PM

Very well penned Mala. You've definitely captured the hyper activity of this nutty creature. Congratulations! Brian

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/3/2022 8:25:00 AM

Thank you, Brian. Yes, this "nutty creature" is very much fun.

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/2/2022 7:20:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me virtually delight in squirrels... since I haven't seen one yet in its natural habitat (except in the zoo once). God bless you.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/2/2022 7:30:00 PM

Thanks, Beata. You haven't seen Squirrels in natural habitat!!! We have Squirrels scurrying all around us in the garden...of course you don't see them much in winter. Funny creatures - very cute!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/2/2022 6:26:00 PM

Good one, Malabika! CONGRATS on your win! Janice

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/2/2022 6:37:00 PM

Thanks, Janice. Appreciate your comment.