Friend, I

Friend, I am crying beside you wiping off my tears,
yet you seem to not notice nor care. 
Friend, you make me suspicious of all of our cheers. 
as you steal a glance of my tragic tears. 

Friend, I guided you when you wiped off your tears
And I never looked away from you for all these years
Yet all I receive is a stare of white and nothingness,
waiting for me to fall even more to the abyss of darkness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 30, 2024 at 8:25 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 24, 2016 at 3:47 PM
Andrew Park, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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