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I heard him say to me, Thanks. For what????, I asked. With a thunderous sigh, lightinin' gasp. He said let me finish, man! 'til I finish, man, just, If you can.... listen. I stared at his light filled eyes, and to my surprise, as began to explain..... Reminiscing of our younger days. He seem to be on a journey with each word he spoke, sound, laughing, recalling from his throat one of my old jokes. He went on and on, about our missions some just endured, some incomplete, Telling me he was proud to be there with me. Then out of the blue, he burst into tears, I jumped, as he yelled I could only tell the state of mind, he was travelling. He said there were times, I felt down, lost without a clue, yet I could always depend, on you, to see me through. He said FRIEND, THANK YOU!!! As I stood there hanging on every word, I became overwhelmed, emotional. I said to him, Man "you are my brotha', my strength and my truth. I would be half the man, half a friend, If it wasn't for you. So I just take some time, each day or two to acknowledge those among us, we call TRUE FRIENDS giving them their just due.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/30/2011 1:32:00 PM
Congrats on your HM in this contest. Love Glenna
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Date: 7/29/2011 11:45:00 AM
Congrats on your HM, Jesu. Nice going. Have a great weekend. Ralph
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Date: 7/26/2011 1:01:00 PM
Yes, sometimes we do need to hear that thank you-- wonderful poem that I enjoyed reading, Jesu :) congrats :D
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Date: 7/26/2011 7:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Michael's "Ode to a Friend" contest Jesu. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2011 11:54:00 PM
Congrats Jesu on your HM in the contest ode to a friend.. with this brilliant beauty luv..enjoy honor...
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Date: 7/25/2011 10:34:00 PM
thank you for participating in my contest!~Michael
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Date: 7/25/2011 9:40:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Michael, jesu
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Date: 3/22/2010 2:00:00 PM
Interesting topic of being a good friend..We all need to be reminder that friends and family are very important...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/18/2010 12:31:00 PM
Thank you for presenting us with your wonderful poetry to read today Jesu. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for your kind comments my friend. Love, Carol
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