Friend

I heard him say to me,
Thanks.
For what????, I asked.
With a thunderous sigh,
lightinin' gasp.

He said let me finish, man!
'til I finish, man,
just, If you can....
listen.

I stared at his light filled eyes,
and to my surprise,
as began to explain.....
Reminiscing of our younger days.

He seem to be on a journey
with each word  he spoke,
sound, laughing,
recalling
from his throat 
one of my old jokes.

He went on  and on,
about our missions
some just endured,
some incomplete,
Telling me he was proud 
to be there with me.
 
Then out of the blue,
he burst into tears,
I jumped, as he yelled
I could only tell 
the state of mind,
he was travelling.

He said there were times,
I felt down,  lost without a clue,
yet I could always depend,
on you, to see me through.
He said FRIEND, THANK YOU!!!

As I stood there hanging on every word,
I became overwhelmed,
emotional.
I said to him,
Man "you are my brotha',
my strength and my truth.

I would be half the man, half a friend,
If it wasn't for you.

So I just take some time,
each day or two
to acknowledge those among us,
we call TRUE FRIENDS
giving them their just due.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Poetess Avatar
July 30, 2011 at 1:32 PM
Congrats on your HM in this contest. Love Glenna
Taylor Avatar
July 29, 2011 at 11:45 AM
Congrats on your HM, Jesu. Nice going. Have a great weekend. Ralph
K. Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 1:01 PM
Yes, sometimes we do need to hear that thank you-- wonderful poem that I enjoyed reading, Jesu :) congrats :D
Brown Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 7:16 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Michael's "Ode to a Friend" contest Jesu. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 11:54 PM
Congrats Jesu on your HM in the contest ode to a friend.. with this brilliant beauty luv..enjoy honor...
Hornschuch Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 10:34 PM
thank you for participating in my contest!~Michael
Mehta Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 9:40 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Michael, jesu
Kendrick Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 2:00 PM
Interesting topic of being a good friend..We all need to be reminder that friends and family are very important...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Brown Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 12:31 PM
Thank you for presenting us with your wonderful poetry to read today Jesu. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for your kind comments my friend. Love, Carol
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