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Friday pm dash

I'm stuck in this rush hour traffic
when all i want to do is get home quick



AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 4:39 PM
gosh, I remember that anxious feeling so well...hope you had a relaxing weekend, Sara
Gauthier Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 9:35 PM
Ah... the joys of retirement ~
Hassall Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 4:17 PM
This is me, for sure. Traffic isn't my friend most days, but for some reason, its always worse on Fridays!
Gauthier Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 9:35 PM
All the best to you, Kathleen ~
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