Friday

Breezy Friday morn
I fear your colors
A heart is dusty

seasonshaiku

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Anne Rutherford

April 28, 2011 at 3:02 PM

Desiree for me most days are the same , but when I was working outside the home fridays were special . Did you get out on the town. hope so .Anne

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 26, 2011 at 8:06 PM

Lovely and lilting creation Desiree.. like the dusty heart reference luv.. thankxx for your sweet comments on my poetry .. so appreciated..luv..

James Foulk

April 26, 2011 at 2:07 PM

since i retired all the days are the same, except Friday, knowing that my wife will be off for the weeken. loved this piece, enjoyed reading it.

Poet Destroyer A

April 25, 2011 at 11:17 AM

Deriree, now.. i love fridays no matter the time and season.. love your haiku.. p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

April 21, 2011 at 8:38 AM

An inspiring write as Good Friday approaches, Desiree. Surely all Christ's friends feared that day as well, but if you are fearing the onset of a lonely weekend, I can relate to the "dusty heart" sentiments. Have a blessed Easter! Love, Carolyn