Friction Builds Up Sense

Magnet transmits strength		
                                      Iron bar remains touched 		
                                        friction builds up sense
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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A   Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 3:56 PM
you put much thought in this haiku...love it..pd
Sweetheart Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 7:34 PM
steps of ultimate creativity bl.. always enjoy your design of words and wisdom to present.. thankxx for warm welcome comments..my friend ..
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 11:43 AM
Hi, BL, good to see you here with more new poetry. I am having computer problems but will try to see you when I can. I appreciate your kindness always. Andrea
Kendrick Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 7:28 AM
Interesting Haiku..Can the magnet be transfered or the strength?..Sara
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January 8, 2012 at 10:12 AM
Strength here means energy.
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January 8, 2012 at 10:07 AM
Thanks for your comment, my friend. I mean Iron bar receives the magnetic power from the magnet by friction keeping in touch for few days. Like this our sense also develops inner. I think in this way, my lovely friend. bl
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