Freshness Shows At Dawn

under bright sun's noon
                                   nature smiles gloriously
                                       be with glorious

                                     at night it respires
                                rebuilds from every corners
                                 freshness shows at dawn 

                                  evening hue says with
                               good bye for the time being
                                   will come back again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Andresen Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 2:31 PM
- Really beautiful haiku, my friend Bl - (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 2:37 PM
Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your beautiful comment with 7. Loved always, bl
Trifiatis Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 2:07 PM
The dance of light and darkness choreographed by your verses dear BLD!
Devnath  Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 2:08 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
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