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Fresh Insights

proud communal standing of oak — leaves allot fresh air 8/12/2020 Ziket Form 8/5 syllables *Learned about this form from Gershon by way of Line. I love brevity! Fun!

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Maurice Rigoler

Date: 8/24/2020 11:13:00 AM

Some of the most profound poems are the briefest and with few words are often profound. This is a good example. / Maurice

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/12/2020 7:36:00 PM

Yes!! A zinger, Kim. Took me a bit to get it. And then -- ZAP! Kudos! And hats off to Line. Thanks for mentioning her (and me, too). Thrills and Chills, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2020 7:38:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon! Fun form!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/12/2020 1:02:00 PM

A wealth of inspiration discovered in this impressive little twisting of words. Blessings and love

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2020 2:50:00 PM

Thank you, Regina!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/12/2020 10:36:00 AM

Where would we be without oxygen-emitting plants? The oak plays an essential role in nature. Very insightful, Kim! Hugs, Carolyn

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2020 12:16:00 PM

I love my trees! A tree hugger here! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/12/2020 8:14:00 AM

gosh i have never tried this form Kim so few words say so much:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2020 12:16:00 PM

I just love brevity! Thank you!

John Watt

Date: 8/12/2020 8:12:00 AM

Kim, in brevity the love of strong words shines. You have chosen some great ones, 'proud', 'communal', 'oak', 'fresh air'. I have much to learn about brevity, thanks for the master's course.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2020 12:15:00 PM

Thank you, my friend! I appreciate your comment!