Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

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proud communal standing of oak —
                                 leaves allot fresh air

8/12/2020
Ziket Form 8/5 syllables

*Learned about this form from Gershon
by way of Line. I love brevity! Fun!

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Maurice Rigoler August 24, 2020 at 11:13 AM Some of the most profound poems are the briefest and with few words are often profound. This is a good example. / Maurice

Gershon Wolf August 12, 2020 at 7:36 PM Yes!! A zinger, Kim. Took me a bit to get it. And then -- ZAP! Kudos! And hats off to Line. Thanks for mentioning her (and me, too). Thrills and Chills, Gershon Kim Rodrigues August 12, 2020 at 7:38 PM Thanks, Gershon! Fun form!

Regina Mcintosh August 12, 2020 at 1:02 PM A wealth of inspiration discovered in this impressive little twisting of words. Blessings and love Kim Rodrigues August 12, 2020 at 2:50 PM Thank you, Regina!

Carolyn Devonshire August 12, 2020 at 10:36 AM Where would we be without oxygen-emitting plants? The oak plays an essential role in nature. Very insightful, Kim! Hugs, Carolyn Kim Rodrigues August 12, 2020 at 12:16 PM I love my trees! A tree hugger here! :)

Jan Allison August 12, 2020 at 8:14 AM gosh i have never tried this form Kim so few words say so much:-) hugs jan xx Kim Rodrigues August 12, 2020 at 12:16 PM I just love brevity! Thank you!

John Watt August 12, 2020 at 8:12 AM Kim, in brevity the love of strong words shines. You have chosen some great ones, 'proud', 'communal', 'oak', 'fresh air'. I have much to learn about brevity, thanks for the master's course. Kim Rodrigues August 12, 2020 at 12:15 PM Thank you, my friend! I appreciate your comment!