Trevor Pitts Poet Rhyme

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Foolish thoughts, a young child's dream
Unanswered prayer, hurts more than it seems
Lies to be told, lies left unsaid
Truth hurts, sometimes said to be read
Anxious tears, so many feelings
Hidden fears, no reason to be concealing
Heart broken, your goodbyes have left me
Broken thoughts, why can't I just be
Who am I, I have nothing left
Who are you, you have gone in theft
New beginning, brand knew start
Fresh clothes, healed heart
Life's promising, the clouds are clearing
Anyone there, the question I'm fearing

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Poet Destroyer A January 15, 2011 at 7:24 PM loved the last four lines, enjoyed this one Trevor,..p.d.

John Rhinem July 17, 2010 at 5:11 AM Smile ~ Well, you know what they say -- 'Seek & One Shall Find'....Nicely written and presented thought and food for anothers thought...."Much Warmth & Love to You & Yours," John!:) ~

Vrushani Thaker July 16, 2010 at 11:13 PM Be positive!!!!!!!!!!!! This should be in mind!!!! Great work!!!! This is a common thought put in challenging way!!!!!! Vrushani!!!