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Fresco Moon

FRESCO MOON Moonbeams, my dear, shimmering, as our ship rocks to the Caribbean beat. We gaze over the rails, starlight glimmering upon deep-dark waters, fresco upbeat. Monet, would paint these waters, dear. Revel in this masterpiece of flooded light. The mystic sea ripples the universal mirror, into our current, four-pieced crescent delight. The moon, whole like us, as we’ve grown in love. Mannah, dipped into the god-sized sea, so white, like virgin silk, svelte as a sweet-honey dove. Sweetheart, we are closer under this moonlit night. 1/4/2018 Water and Sky Contest/Gregory Barden

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Date: 1/5/2018 4:51:00 AM
A beautiful romantic poem, Kim, love the last stanza. Best of luck. John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2018 9:22:00 AM
Thank you, John!
Date: 1/4/2018 10:33:00 PM
Beautiful, Kim. Congrats on a great poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2018 9:23:00 AM
Thanks, Line!
Date: 1/4/2018 9:09:00 PM
Wow Kim, this poem is going to be hard to beat! It is captivating and seeped in romance! This is one of your best! Brava! : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2018 9:23:00 AM
I appreciate your comment, Connie! <3 Kim
Date: 1/4/2018 9:16:00 AM
Love that second stanza Kim, its so true.. and it really sets the imagery for the poem.. Excellent poem...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2018 9:24:00 AM
I appreciate your comment, dear Silent! <3 Kim
Date: 1/4/2018 9:12:00 AM
This is so beautiful, Kim. I can feel it. I love the last stanza especially!1 Good Luck xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2018 9:25:00 AM
Thanks so much, Mike <3 Kim
Date: 1/4/2018 8:51:00 AM
Lovely romantic poem--sailing on water, adoring the moon..best for a win, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2018 9:25:00 AM
Thanks so much! Oh how I adore a good cruise! <3 Kim
Date: 1/4/2018 7:37:00 AM
This is absolutely beautiful Kim! Well done :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2018 7:39:00 AM
Thanks so much, Heidi! <3

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