Fresco Moon

FRESCO MOON Moonbeams, my dear, shimmering, as our ship rocks to the Caribbean beat. We gaze over the rails, starlight glimmering upon deep-dark waters, fresco upbeat. Monet, would paint these waters, dear. Revel in this masterpiece of flooded light. The mystic sea ripples the universal mirror, into our current, four-pieced crescent delight. The moon, whole like us, as we’ve grown in love. Mannah, dipped into the god-sized sea, so white, like virgin silk, svelte as a sweet-honey dove. Sweetheart, we are closer under this moonlit night. 1/4/2018 Water and Sky Contest/Gregory Barden
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Gondolf Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 4:51 AM
A beautiful romantic poem, Kim, love the last stanza. Best of luck. John
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 9:22 AM
Thank you, John!
Gauthier Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 10:33 PM
Beautiful, Kim. Congrats on a great poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 9:23 AM
Thanks, Line!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 9:09 PM
Wow Kim, this poem is going to be hard to beat! It is captivating and seeped in romance! This is one of your best! Brava! : )
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 9:23 AM
I appreciate your comment, Connie! <3 Kim
One Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 9:16 AM
Love that second stanza Kim, its so true.. and it really sets the imagery for the poem.. Excellent poem...
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 9:24 AM
I appreciate your comment, dear Silent! <3 Kim
Gentile Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 9:12 AM
This is so beautiful, Kim. I can feel it. I love the last stanza especially!1 Good Luck xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 9:25 AM
Thanks so much, Mike <3 Kim
Pandit Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 8:51 AM
Lovely romantic poem--sailing on water, adoring the moon..best for a win, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 9:25 AM
Thanks so much! Oh how I adore a good cruise! <3 Kim
Sands Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 7:37 AM
This is absolutely beautiful Kim! Well done :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 7:39 AM
Thanks so much, Heidi! <3
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