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High Resolution Pictures: Cloud Cumulus is a free photo

- Freely and Easily -

Of my drowsy deep summer dreams ~ pictures in black and white
Divine heavenly clouds floats freely and easily ~ angels floss
My frustration floating through no mans land ~ patience my friend









Sijo
(14-16-14 syllables)
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27.07.2016
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Devnath  Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 12:21 PM
A great poem of great outlook, an excellent way to nourish inner thought. Well done my lovely lovely friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
Andresen Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 12:59 PM
- Glad you really enjoyed this - thanks for nice visit and beautiful comments, Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Raven Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 5:44 PM
Another beautiful write from your pen Anne-Lise. One can just lose ones self within these words. It is the most beautiful dream. Fly among the clouds Anne-Lise, where your beautiful poetry shall always belong. This is a seven and a fave for me. Hugs....Mike. XX
Andresen Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 7:22 AM
- A pleasure that you enjoy this little poem, many thanks for the comment, a 7 + fav., my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 5:30 PM
I really like this, Anne Lise. Great job.
Andresen Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 7:21 AM
- Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 2:51 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, I enjoyed this lovely write. Well done:-) Alexis
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 3:13 PM
- Thank you very much, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Yvonne Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 12:32 PM
Excellent write! Loved It.
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 1:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Armand :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 11:15 AM
ohh, this is really charming, anne... patience is a virtue!.. happy huggs
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 11:48 AM
- Thank you very much, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 9:28 AM
Cool! Hugs Rick.
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 11:48 AM
- Thank you very much, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 7:52 AM
Impressive. Beautiful analogy's and Original. Past my bedtime - but slave to cricket. NZ playing Zimbabwe. David in wrong time zone this morning.
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 11:47 AM
- Who won ? - Thank you very much, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 6:58 AM
Beautiful ...
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 7:47 AM
- Thank you very much, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 4:40 PM
A lovely write Sunshine....hugs
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 7:46 AM
- Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 4:38 PM
Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your work..Reads like a winner if for a contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 7:45 AM
- Thank you very much, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bauer Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 4:23 PM
beautifully written, anne lise!
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 7:45 AM
- Thank you very much, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Neels Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 1:44 PM
This is a lovely write Anne-Lise.. lovely imagery ;) xxx
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 1:52 PM
- Thank you very much, Wilma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 11:47 AM
Patience is a must...lovely write A-L
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 12:04 PM
- Thank you very much, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 10:39 AM
lovely imagery Anne Lise I especially love 'angel's floss' :-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 11:29 AM
- Thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 10:19 AM
Lovely imagery, Anne-lise:)
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 11:28 AM
- Thank you very much, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kannan Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 8:51 AM
Great imagery and a beautiful picture...
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 11:28 AM
- Thank you very much, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 8:30 AM
A wonderful Sijo poem coupled with marvelous picture! Your soul has expressed herself most eloquently dear, Anne-Lise! A seven. Hugs!
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 11:27 AM
- Thank you very much, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Turner Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 8:24 AM
I dream in color and usually not too peaceful. It's good you can relieve your frustrations this way. So peaceful! Shows the softness of your heart, Anne Lise.
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 11:26 AM
- Thank you very much, Daniel - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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