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Freedom Is a Lie

You are free until you speed and get caught and the payment starts on the no money down car you bought You are free until your credit card is declined and as long as your friends who pick up the tab don't mind You are free until rent is due and you are behind until you can no longer debit and credit is denied You are free until you work a 9-5 and your monthly pay check does little more than help you survive You are free till you succumb to a vice and your spare time is taken up by having to suffice

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/5/2015 2:31:00 PM
Less is more it's perfect its a poem not a novel it's about imagination not an autobiography I think it's good
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Date: 7/15/2011 1:38:00 AM
Hmm...nice write.
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Date: 7/14/2011 9:36:00 PM
That's quite good, but I think there's more you could have done with it. Great points though, 7. -Kirby MD
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Rick Villafana
Date: 4/5/2015 2:28:00 PM
Most of the time less is more it's a poem not a novel
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Rick Villafana
Date: 4/5/2015 2:28:00 PM
Most of the time less is more it's a poem not a novel
Date: 7/14/2011 9:06:00 PM
Never thought of it that way. thanks for the new thoughts Lee
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Date: 7/14/2011 9:04:00 PM
Never thought of it that way. thanks for the new thoughts Lee
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Date: 7/14/2011 9:03:00 PM
Never thought of it that way. thanks for the new thoughts Lee
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