Freedom Breeze

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mountain breeze wafting masses of colorful blooms incessant motion on the lapis sea the wind's at last in my sails sunshine caresses wind's in the orchard animating still life fruit lazy summer day along with birdsong its whistles breaks the silence green forest for miles

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/14/2022 1:39:00 PM

Oh what a beautiful write and picture. I love this one. I wish I was in your boat and could sail far away. Have a great/blessed day writing away....................

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/14/2022 2:45:00 PM

Thank you very much, Paula. Your words bring on smiles. Happy Valentine's Day, Evelyn

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/1/2022 2:09:00 AM

beautiful haikus

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/1/2022 9:56:00 AM

Thank you so much. :)