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Freedom Breeze

mountain breeze wafting
masses of colorful blooms
incessant motion

on the lapis sea
the wind's at last in my sails
sunshine caresses

wind's in the orchard
animating still life fruit
lazy summer day

along with birdsong
its whistles breaks the silence
green forest for miles
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Goldsmith Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 1:39 PM
Oh what a beautiful write and picture. I love this one. I wish I was in your boat and could sail far away. Have a great/blessed day writing away....................
Buehler Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 2:45 PM
Thank you very much, Paula. Your words bring on smiles. Happy Valentine's Day, Evelyn
Buhagiar Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 2:09 AM
beautiful haikus
Buehler Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 9:56 AM
Thank you so much. :)
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