Freedom

Forever feels held in chains
Revelation comes to your brains
Eternally held deep in the heart
Enter in so new life can start
Drawn to God's perfect love
O the depths for Christ is enough
My future now is heaven above
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Daniel Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 7:26 AM
This is a lovely rhyming acrostic with which I can relate:)
Mcconnell Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 9:13 AM
Thanks Jo, glad you loved it and for advice on changes, will look at later, been away weekend just back and quite tired, blessings Gordon
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