Freedom

Free; exist, not living
                Feelings devastated
                            Faceless in emotion
                               Flowers of past now dead
                           Forever gone, new start
                Frantic to find new love
Futile in my hearts want

Pleiades F
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
09/23/2016

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Kim Merryman

Date: 9/27/2016 2:33:00 PM

A different look at freedom, Mark. The freedom to start again. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/28/2016 1:01:00 AM

Thank you Kim - I do try - I know I have a very different way of looking at life and my approach might not be on the same path as many. - I value and appreciate your input Regards, Mark

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2016 3:53:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great wins poems, Mark :) - I do not participate often in contest, but this I like very much - A challenge like a puzzle .... not easy ... but Pleiades poems is a wonderful form - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/28/2016 12:59:00 AM

Thank you for reading Anne-Lise - I value your comments too. Well I think you should be entering more contests as I think you are a very worthy writer. Regards, Mark