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Freedom

Free; exist, not living Feelings devastated Faceless in emotion Flowers of past now dead Forever gone, new start Frantic to find new love Futile in my hearts want Pleiades F Sponsor: Kim Merryman 09/23/2016

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Kim Merryman
Date: 9/27/2016 2:33:00 PM
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A different look at freedom, Mark. The freedom to start again. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/28/2016 1:01:00 AM
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Thank you Kim - I do try - I know I have a very different way of looking at life and my approach might not be on the same path as many. - I value and appreciate your input Regards, Mark
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2016 3:53:00 AM
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- Congratulations on your great wins poems, Mark :) - I do not participate often in contest, but this I like very much - A challenge like a puzzle .... not easy ... but Pleiades poems is a wonderful form - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/28/2016 12:59:00 AM
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Thank you for reading Anne-Lise - I value your comments too. Well I think you should be entering more contests as I think you are a very worthy writer. Regards, Mark
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/26/2016 6:21:00 PM
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Dropping back with my congrats Mark:-) hugs jan xx
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Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/27/2016 12:12:00 AM
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Thank you Jan - thanks for the support Mark
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/24/2016 7:33:00 AM
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- Wonderful written, Mark - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/24/2016 8:01:00 AM
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Thank you so much for reading Anne-Lise Special day for you Regards, Mark
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/23/2016 3:38:00 PM
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love the creative form - reminds me of an arrow and that you are 'moving forward':-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/23/2016 10:39:00 PM
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Thank you Jan - I am trying to embrace other forms, I hope they like it. Regards, Mark

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