Mark Paul Van Der Merwe Poet Verse

Freedom

Free; exist, not living
                Feelings devastated
                            Faceless in emotion
                               Flowers of past now dead
                           Forever gone, new start
                Frantic to find new love
Futile in my hearts want

Pleiades F
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
09/23/2016

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Kim Merryman September 27, 2016 at 2:33 PM A different look at freedom, Mark. The freedom to start again. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Mark Paul Van Der Merwe September 28, 2016 at 1:01 AM Thank you Kim - I do try - I know I have a very different way of looking at life and my approach might not be on the same path as many. - I value and appreciate your input Regards, Mark

Anne-Lise Andresen September 27, 2016 at 3:53 AM - Congratulations on your great wins poems, Mark :) - I do not participate often in contest, but this I like very much - A challenge like a puzzle .... not easy ... but Pleiades poems is a wonderful form - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Mark Paul Van Der Merwe September 28, 2016 at 12:59 AM Thank you for reading Anne-Lise - I value your comments too. Well I think you should be entering more contests as I think you are a very worthy writer. Regards, Mark

Jan Allison September 26, 2016 at 6:21 PM Dropping back with my congrats Mark:-) hugs jan xx Mark Paul Van Der Merwe September 27, 2016 at 12:12 AM Thank you Jan - thanks for the support Mark

Anne-Lise Andresen September 24, 2016 at 7:33 AM - Wonderful written, Mark - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Mark Paul Van Der Merwe September 24, 2016 at 8:01 AM Thank you so much for reading Anne-Lise Special day for you Regards, Mark

Jan Allison September 23, 2016 at 3:38 PM love the creative form - reminds me of an arrow and that you are 'moving forward':-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Mark Paul Van Der Merwe September 23, 2016 at 10:39 PM Thank you Jan - I am trying to embrace other forms, I hope they like it. Regards, Mark