Freedom

cage opens
stiff wings spread -
blue skies call
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gazbowski Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 10:00 PM
Excellent haiku David.
De La Croes Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 9:14 AM
Thanks, Lenny. Your comments are much appreciated! David
Delaney Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 11:41 AM
Wonderful haiku. Nothing makes you feel as good as setting a caged bird free. SuZ
De La Croes Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 1:40 AM
Thank you, SuZ. Birds belong in the air, so that we can also take a flight of fancy! David
Allison Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 4:28 AM
WOW an awesome haiku David such fabulous imagery in a few words:-) hugs Jan xx7
De La Croes Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 4:47 AM
Thanks, Jan. Your comments are encouraging... David
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