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A blackened soul stays so cold. Is there warmth? She needs closure. A life she once knew was so cold. She looked within herself to find saving grace, a safe place. She found something as warm as the Son. Her soul is set free. Now she is warm. She stays put in silence, now confused in the light she has longed for. A new dimension approaches. She has finally broken the silence. She wants to be heard! She wants to be heard! Through everlasting eternity where she can be so free. Her soul is now as a bird.

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Date: 9/30/2015 7:21:00 AM
Hi Jewels. To find one's wings and be free from such darkness is truly a blessing. Thanks for sharing and welcome to Poetry Soup...... Robert.
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Date: 9/27/2015 9:18:00 PM
Hi Jewels, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/27/2015 1:43:00 PM
- Hey Jewels :) - Welcome with your first poem here on P- Soup - Hope your stay will give you much pleasure - I've been here since 11/26/2011 ....... it is a pleasure to share poems and read what others write - I wish you good luck :) - Nice to "meet" you :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/24/2015 11:03:00 AM
A wonderful poem to read, Jewels, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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