Freedom

destroy the body, free the mind.
everything gets left behind.
although I don't have much to leave,
it's not as beautiful as it seems.
I can feel it approaching.
but im not scared.
the freedom is filling, the sickness unshared.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 9, 2011 at 5:52 AM
What a wonderful poem to read on an early Saturday morning Jason. Hope you are enjoying your weekend and that your are finding much inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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