Freedom

Freedom Imagine tomorrow that your freedom was gone Only five miles of travel from your own front lawn Isolated in fear, vulnerable to attack No guns or ammo, unable to watch your own back Would you still point your finger and damn the U.S. Or pray for our country and hope God to bless The United States of America is our planets last stand Our doors are still open and refugees are not banned We are having some issues which we soon will repair The Eagle still flies and there’s freedom in our air

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/3/2021 11:13:00 PM

Very well said!

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/10/2021 6:28:00 AM

Thanks bud!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/2/2021 12:48:00 PM

This is such a good poem, Mark, standing up for our country like all good patriots should do. I appreciate you and the poem!

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/10/2021 6:28:00 AM

Thanks Milton, I appreciate that and you as well!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/29/2021 3:26:00 PM

so glad you are flying the flag for the US Mark:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/10/2021 6:28:00 AM

I try, thanks Jan!

Jenna Logan

Date: 9/14/2021 2:19:00 PM

I’m happy to see your stand for the privileges we have as Americans. Those who complain should consider spending time in another country and then see how much their bitterness seems unwarranted.

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/15/2021 11:54:00 AM

We don’t bash his country because of respect….not for him.

Mark Koplin
Date: 9/15/2021 11:16:00 AM

I remember a certain somebody who kept bashing the U.S. now his country is in turmoil. At least people here are not bashing is country when they easily could.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/13/2021 1:09:00 PM

Our freedom is not for sale, we never forget the brave servicemen and women who gave us that freedom. Im grateful I live in a civilised country where I'm free from persecution. God bless America. Hope you're keeping well Mark. Tom

Mark Koplin
Date: 9/15/2021 11:14:00 AM

Thanks Tom, I’m well and I hope you are too