Freedom

Came looking for a verse to transcribe
Couldn’t think of anything to inscribe
Mind wasn’t directing any orderly lyrics
Composedly accepting everything as is
No ripples of thoughts, no dilemmas,
No judgements, no opinions,
No portrayals of any sorts 
“Why does anything need description?” was its question
“Just be” was its proposition
Decided to ruminate on that
A feeling of freedom came just like that.


Smita Kulkarni
02/11/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Lamoureux Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 8:30 PM
Interesting contemplation. ;0)
Kulkarni Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 2:53 PM
:)
Pandit Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 1:12 PM
That is such a solemn thought--"just be"! A powerful write Smita--a bliss for those who can live in your message. Not easy for most. Much illumination in your words.
Kulkarni Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 3:10 PM
It is indeed hard to live in the message Vijay! Thanks for visiting.
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