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A fish swimming in a big pool Thought to itself this is cool. It makes a fish feel complete and whole An improvement from a goldfish bowl. As the fish swam away to join the school He prayed for survival in this big pool

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Date: 12/29/2020 3:36:00 AM
I have been both fishes, the small bowl is my preferred place.
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 12/29/2020 7:54:00 PM
More security in a small bowl ...
Date: 12/9/2020 9:29:00 AM
Who can deny that freedom is not to be attained? Lovely. ~~
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 12/11/2020 4:41:00 PM
Thankyou, for your kind comments. Take care...
Date: 12/5/2020 11:36:00 AM
First two lines are a winner! Aloha! Rico
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 12/11/2020 4:47:00 PM
G' Day Rico I appreciate your encouraging comments. Have a good weekend...

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