Free Until

Until I saw thine eyes
I was free
Now I dost realize
Thou art all I see

Until I heard thy voice
My thoughts belonged to me
Now I have no choice
My thoughts belong to thee

Until you captured my heart
My love was mine to give
To thee my heart I impart
Thy love I need to live

Until you took my soul
I am no longer who I used to be
It is I thou now control
My soul a prisoner to thee

Freedom to nothing to something Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Delilah Ventura
3/26/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 9:02 PM
Wow - this sure sounds like a top winner to me, Timothy!
Mcguire Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 4:05 PM
Thank you friend for the kind words
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