Free Spirit

She rides along the waves so happy and carefree Daring to take chances with an open endless sea She has no heavy anchor to always hold her down She floats atop the waters with her beacon shining round Dry land lies before her but still, she sails on For she is a free spirit and has only just begun

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Laura Mckenzie

Date: 7/18/2008 12:51:00 PM

Congratulations for being featured great write good flow. Laura :)

Cayetano Young

Date: 7/17/2008 8:33:00 PM

congratulations on your poem being featured this week. very well deserved. always, GiNoLoco

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/15/2008 3:49:00 PM

This is an excellent poem. I like the flow of the words and the message. I can see the imagery of the sea so clearly. Great job! ~ Joseph

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 7/15/2008 12:47:00 PM

First, conratulations on the feature of this write. It is fluid as the sea itself and so wonderfully descriptive. Your words are therefore so clear and enjoyable. Very well written. Michael

P Sheart

Date: 7/15/2008 11:40:00 AM

Hello Alana This is so beautiful like a very special dream one does not want to awaken from. Enjoyed very much. Congrats on your well deserved feature write this week. Stay well. Love Light Truth Patricia

Marycile Beer

Date: 7/15/2008 8:07:00 AM

A place where we all need to be at times. Beautiful Alana. Keep up the good work. Thanks for you support while I have been trying to get my act together again. God Bless, Cile

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/15/2008 4:47:00 AM

Congratulations Alana on your beautiful poetry being featured this week. Miss you! Hope all is well. Love & hugs, shar

Heidie Buys

Date: 7/14/2008 2:27:00 PM

Congratulations on being featured this week. A very uplifting poem and most enjoyable to read. Regards Heidie