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Free Spirit

She rides along the waves
so happy and carefree
Daring to take chances
with an open endless sea
She has no heavy anchor
to always hold her down
She floats atop the waters
with her beacon shining round
Dry land lies before her
but still, she sails on
For she is a free spirit
and has only just begun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Mckenzie Avatar
July 18, 2008 at 12:51 PM
Congratulations for being featured great write good flow. Laura :)
Young Avatar
July 17, 2008 at 8:33 PM
congratulations on your poem being featured this week. very well deserved. always, GiNoLoco
Spence Sr Avatar
July 15, 2008 at 3:49 PM
This is an excellent poem. I like the flow of the words and the message. I can see the imagery of the sea so clearly. Great job! ~ Joseph
Degenhardt Avatar
July 15, 2008 at 12:47 PM
First, conratulations on the feature of this write. It is fluid as the sea itself and so wonderfully descriptive. Your words are therefore so clear and enjoyable. Very well written. Michael
Sheart Avatar
July 15, 2008 at 11:40 AM
Hello Alana This is so beautiful like a very special dream one does not want to awaken from. Enjoyed very much. Congrats on your well deserved feature write this week. Stay well. Love Light Truth Patricia
Beer Avatar
July 15, 2008 at 8:07 AM
A place where we all need to be at times. Beautiful Alana. Keep up the good work. Thanks for you support while I have been trying to get my act together again. God Bless, Cile
Winter Avatar
July 15, 2008 at 4:47 AM
Congratulations Alana on your beautiful poetry being featured this week. Miss you! Hope all is well. Love & hugs, shar
Buys Avatar
July 14, 2008 at 2:27 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. A very uplifting poem and most enjoyable to read. Regards Heidie
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
July 14, 2008 at 11:39 AM
Nice to see this one featured. Congratulations Alana. Vince
Brown Avatar
July 14, 2008 at 6:29 AM
~~~Lana~~~ congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week. Love, Carol
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July 13, 2008 at 11:36 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Lana.Rgds Brian
Jordan Avatar
July 13, 2008 at 4:35 PM
Very beautiful poem - i hope that freedom last - congrats on the feature
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