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Free Spirit

She rides along the waves so happy and carefree Daring to take chances with an open endless sea She has no heavy anchor to always hold her down She floats atop the waters with her beacon shining round Dry land lies before her but still, she sails on For she is a free spirit and has only just begun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 7/18/2008 12:51:00 PM
Congratulations for being featured great write good flow. Laura :)
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Date: 7/17/2008 8:33:00 PM
congratulations on your poem being featured this week. very well deserved. always, GiNoLoco
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Date: 7/15/2008 3:49:00 PM
This is an excellent poem. I like the flow of the words and the message. I can see the imagery of the sea so clearly. Great job! ~ Joseph
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Date: 7/15/2008 12:47:00 PM
First, conratulations on the feature of this write. It is fluid as the sea itself and so wonderfully descriptive. Your words are therefore so clear and enjoyable. Very well written. Michael
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Date: 7/15/2008 11:40:00 AM
Hello Alana This is so beautiful like a very special dream one does not want to awaken from. Enjoyed very much. Congrats on your well deserved feature write this week. Stay well. Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 7/15/2008 8:07:00 AM
A place where we all need to be at times. Beautiful Alana. Keep up the good work. Thanks for you support while I have been trying to get my act together again. God Bless, Cile
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Date: 7/15/2008 4:47:00 AM
Congratulations Alana on your beautiful poetry being featured this week. Miss you! Hope all is well. Love & hugs, shar
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Date: 7/14/2008 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. A very uplifting poem and most enjoyable to read. Regards Heidie
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Date: 7/14/2008 11:39:00 AM
Nice to see this one featured. Congratulations Alana. Vince
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Date: 7/14/2008 6:29:00 AM
~~~Lana~~~ congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2008 11:36:00 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Lana.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/13/2008 4:35:00 PM
Very beautiful poem - i hope that freedom last - congrats on the feature
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