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Free Rein

the mind beauty deep
electric storm of wild thoughts —
we control the reins

1/28/2020
Senryu on Mind Poetry Contest
Jenish Somadas

bodysenryu

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Anne-Lise Andresen

February 5, 2020 at 4:14 AM

- Congratulations on a wonderful 1st place in the contest, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

February 5, 2020 at 4:59 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Sam Kauffman

February 4, 2020 at 10:50 PM

Kim, Congratulations. Nicely done.

Kim Rodrigues

February 5, 2020 at 4:59 AM

Thank you, Sam!

Sathya Babu

February 4, 2020 at 8:29 PM

Kim, Many Congrats on your TOP WIN!!! Regards, Sathya

Kim Rodrigues

February 5, 2020 at 4:59 AM

Thank you, Sathya!

Andrea Dietrich

February 4, 2020 at 3:14 PM

what a great thought from a great mind. Congrats, Kim

Kim Rodrigues

February 5, 2020 at 5:00 AM

You are so kind, my friend! Thank you!

John Watt

February 4, 2020 at 11:40 AM

Kim, congrats on your win! I love the second line ~ John

Kim Rodrigues

February 5, 2020 at 5:01 AM

Thank you, John!

Jenish Somadas

February 3, 2020 at 11:49 PM

If the rein is with you, mind will fly distant stars.. Congrats on your great win Kim..

Kim Rodrigues

February 5, 2020 at 5:01 AM

Thank you, Jenish, for the fun comment and all! Hugs...Kim

Gershon Wolf

January 28, 2020 at 4:25 PM

Love the play on words with reins. All ten of my thumbs up for this one, Kim! Great! :) Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

January 28, 2020 at 4:38 PM

LOL...on the ten thumbs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 28, 2020 at 1:16 PM

- A great one, Kim :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

January 28, 2020 at 3:33 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! Hugs!

Tom Cunningham

January 28, 2020 at 12:44 PM

Well we do our best to control those thoughts, sometimes they don't behave lol. Good senyru Kim, good luck. Tom

Kim Rodrigues

January 28, 2020 at 3:33 PM

Yes, sometimes they get away from us! Insert foot!

Arturo Michael

January 28, 2020 at 10:52 AM

Is "we" us...it hard to control wild thoughts...Nice imagery

Kim Rodrigues

January 28, 2020 at 3:34 PM

A general we or us.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

January 28, 2020 at 7:58 AM

Very nice! Have a good day :)

Kim Rodrigues

January 28, 2020 at 3:35 PM

Abdullah, thanks! Same to you!

Chris Green

January 28, 2020 at 7:35 AM

Love the play on words here Kim. I am happy your poetry continues to rain on us. Best wishes in the contest

Kim Rodrigues

January 28, 2020 at 3:35 PM

Thank you so much!

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