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the mind beauty deep electric storm of wild thoughts — we control the reins 1/28/2020 Senryu on Mind Poetry Contest Jenish Somadas

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Date: 2/5/2020 4:14:00 AM
- Congratulations on a wonderful 1st place in the contest, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2020 4:59:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 2/4/2020 10:50:00 PM
Kim, Congratulations. Nicely done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2020 4:59:00 AM
Thank you, Sam!
Date: 2/4/2020 8:29:00 PM
Kim, Many Congrats on your TOP WIN!!! Regards, Sathya
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2020 4:59:00 AM
Thank you, Sathya!
Date: 2/4/2020 3:14:00 PM
what a great thought from a great mind. Congrats, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2020 5:00:00 AM
You are so kind, my friend! Thank you!
Date: 2/4/2020 11:40:00 AM
Kim, congrats on your win! I love the second line ~ John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2020 5:01:00 AM
Thank you, John!
Date: 2/3/2020 11:49:00 PM
If the rein is with you, mind will fly distant stars.. Congrats on your great win Kim..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2020 5:01:00 AM
Thank you, Jenish, for the fun comment and all! Hugs...Kim
Date: 1/28/2020 4:25:00 PM
Love the play on words with reins. All ten of my thumbs up for this one, Kim! Great! :) Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2020 4:38:00 PM
LOL...on the ten thumbs :)
Date: 1/28/2020 1:16:00 PM
- A great one, Kim :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2020 3:33:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! Hugs!
Date: 1/28/2020 12:44:00 PM
Well we do our best to control those thoughts, sometimes they don't behave lol. Good senyru Kim, good luck. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2020 3:33:00 PM
Yes, sometimes they get away from us! Insert foot!
Date: 1/28/2020 10:52:00 AM
Is "we" us...it hard to control wild thoughts...Nice imagery
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2020 3:34:00 PM
A general we or us.
Date: 1/28/2020 7:58:00 AM
Very nice! Have a good day :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2020 3:35:00 PM
Abdullah, thanks! Same to you!
Date: 1/28/2020 7:35:00 AM
Love the play on words here Kim. I am happy your poetry continues to rain on us. Best wishes in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2020 3:35:00 PM
Thank you so much!

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