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Free Rein

the mind beauty deep
electric storm of wild thoughts —
we control the reins

1/28/2020
Senryu on Mind Poetry Contest
Jenish Somadas

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/5/2020 4:14:00 AM

- Congratulations on a wonderful 1st place in the contest, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2020 4:59:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/4/2020 10:50:00 PM

Kim, Congratulations. Nicely done.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2020 4:59:00 AM

Thank you, Sam!

Sathya Babu

Date: 2/4/2020 8:29:00 PM

Kim, Many Congrats on your TOP WIN!!! Regards, Sathya

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2020 4:59:00 AM

Thank you, Sathya!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2020 3:14:00 PM

what a great thought from a great mind. Congrats, Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2020 5:00:00 AM

You are so kind, my friend! Thank you!

John Watt

Date: 2/4/2020 11:40:00 AM

Kim, congrats on your win! I love the second line ~ John

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2020 5:01:00 AM

Thank you, John!

Jenish Somadas

Date: 2/3/2020 11:49:00 PM

If the rein is with you, mind will fly distant stars.. Congrats on your great win Kim..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2020 5:01:00 AM

Thank you, Jenish, for the fun comment and all! Hugs...Kim

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/28/2020 4:25:00 PM

Love the play on words with reins. All ten of my thumbs up for this one, Kim! Great! :) Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2020 4:38:00 PM

LOL...on the ten thumbs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/28/2020 1:16:00 PM

- A great one, Kim :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2020 3:33:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! Hugs!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/28/2020 12:44:00 PM

Well we do our best to control those thoughts, sometimes they don't behave lol. Good senyru Kim, good luck. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2020 3:33:00 PM

Yes, sometimes they get away from us! Insert foot!

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/28/2020 10:52:00 AM

Is "we" us...it hard to control wild thoughts...Nice imagery

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2020 3:34:00 PM

A general we or us.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 1/28/2020 7:58:00 AM

Very nice! Have a good day :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2020 3:35:00 PM

Abdullah, thanks! Same to you!

Chris Green

Date: 1/28/2020 7:35:00 AM

Love the play on words here Kim. I am happy your poetry continues to rain on us. Best wishes in the contest

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2020 3:35:00 PM

Thank you so much!

Free Rein

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