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Free Our Love

I was trying to protect you the one thing I want to do I guess it isn't what it's cracked up to be I hope some day you will see how much you mean to me and that I was only trying to be perfect for someone like you doing what I could do to keep you safe and now you've lost faith in the one you love so now I pray to God above for an answer to the task of taking off the mask that I am wearing to lift the weight i have been bearing so my heart can soar like a dove and you and I are free to love

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Date: 5/22/2011 6:27:00 AM
That is a great poem..... The second to last line did not compute for me. Was it 'heart' can soar like a dove? The final line really brought the composition together.
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Date: 1/2/2011 3:06:00 AM
Beautifully Written, I hope that your love realizes how lucky he really is
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Date: 12/30/2010 6:44:00 PM
Amber..,, enjoyed your poem. Stopping by to wish you lots of cheers & joy this comming new year.. May you always find new ways to share your talent and imagination with us here at the soup. Happy new year to you and your family,, God bless,.miss.p.d.
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Date: 12/30/2010 10:37:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning Amber. I will be back after the New Year to read more of your poetry. Wishing you a very Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/30/2010 8:54:00 AM
I know what you mean. I enjoy your work
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