Free Myself

Trapped like a caged bird
Can’t see the beautiful sun
That used to dry my wetted wings
I am dreaming of the day
I could be free and fly high
In the blue and shiny sky 
Nevertheless I am hopeful
Because I realize that the keys are in my possession
But I don’t know where I hide them
I guess I hide them somewhere deep and secure
Shall I look into my soul, into my mind or into my heart?
Because those are the deepest and safest part of myself
I am confident and optimistic
For the keys are not in somebody else’s hands
So I know now that I can get free by myself
It may take a long time
But I am patient and I am ready to wait, 
For that day will be the greatest one in my life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/17/2009 1:14:00 PM
inspiring poem, person certainly can choose to set themselves free from pain
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Date: 11/17/2009 6:03:00 AM
Thank you for starting my week out with some excellent reading Ndeye. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/16/2009 4:52:00 PM
once again another wondrful work! I hope you'll work hard and achive your freedom. And I hope your day will come very soon! keep going! ------Ell
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Date: 11/16/2009 4:22:00 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
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