Free Love
And wanna rush to sea
And be on beach together
And listen foamy surf
To water dip the barefoot
When even waves will stay
Us to will play star Valse
And we shall dance on sand
When lying hand in hand
And wanna rush to sea
And Heat and light
And time to give my dear
And we are strat to do this night
P.S.sorry for the mistakes
I know English very bad
I will be grateful for criticism and tips for correcting errors
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