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Free Falling

Free Falling Falling free through the atmospheric air like many shooting stars Falling so free through the air, up a cloudy sphere of clouded scars Whimsical while crashing onto the ocean, oh what a lucid scene to be seen Like the ill-forgotten mermaids, swimming exotic like the color aquamarine Now you're trying to hold onto something to save your very sheltered life Your body has been free falling, and your very instinct is to survive grief and strife Free falling is keeping you so warm, it's emanating and floating on endlessly through galaxies In a moment you are thinking is this true reality or is it a lucid scene of surreal fantasies One thought has entered your mind, now I am free falling as I make my first parachute jump!!! 03/26/2018 Oh the joy of it all, to go parachuting and making the first free fall takes a persons breath away/ Beauty is simply astonishing about all of our senses coming alive!!! Evie

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/27/2018 4:11:00 AM

I would have to call this a persuasive poem, Evie, because you have persuaded me that Free Falling might be the thing to pursue next. This line really got me there: It's emanating and floating on endlessly through galaxies, is keeping you warm. Wow! I love this poem!

Evie Cw
Date: 3/27/2018 4:26:00 AM

Thank you so very much Caren for your delightful comment on this poem of mine. At the time I really thought it was even better than sex. haha!! It was one thrill of a lifetime. I'd do it again in a heartbeat.